Age/Gender: 14, Male
Location: Los Angeles, CA
Job: Student
Just a humble 14 y/o making House&DnB in his free time.
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You have definately made progress! I dont see many problems with this track at all, the drums are perfect, the effects are spot on, and the atmosphere is great!
Keep working on it and itll be perfect!
Zack
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5'd
5'd
5'd
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MM
I love how you obscurely slipped my myspace into the end of that author comment
I LOVE YOU
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:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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"Current Score: 4.44 / 5.00 (+ 0.028)"
At this point in time, you are #1 in techno.
5'd.
Now for the track!
Sick SICK melodies in here man!
That lead is very dist-y and awesome, love it. A little loub, but thats what dnb's all about, eh?
The string work at the end is just brilliant. Love it. Beautiful and touching man, great ending work. *envy*
The drums sound waaay over compressed, and are very low in the mix. they should be snappier and punchier and cut through the mix without overpowering. You need to work on that, but otherwise, you got it down man.
Huge improvement in quality, keep working on it and you'll be soaring in no time!
Cheers bro
Zack
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Sick!
I like that snare! ( needs a bit more punch but 's all good :D )
Give those vocals now. I swear, i'll kill you if you don't.
It sounds like more of a buildup that an actual track, but all the same, its very rolly and the effects are spot on. I like those tiny variations in the drum patterns, gives it nice flow. Bass is sick, but needs more variation. Compliments the drums perfectly though!
I agree with Quarl that there is always room for improvement, but all in all, it's a huge improvement on the last one!
I'll deffo keep an eye on you for more stuff like this.
Peace bro
Zack
PS:
GET AIM PLESE
FOR MEEeeE
(we can collab if you'd like :D)
Author's Response:
I didn't want to modulate the Bassline at all here... its just a short Pieve and I have no experience with Bassmodulation Xp So I just left it like this and of course its flowing without shiftng too ;) But I will work out something on the final Track. if you want to share some Stuff your are always welcome :D I asked SadSpoon for a Snare Pack and he didn't want to give me something at all, he said I should use the Snares I have to create something cool. Actually I understand him but HEY! Just a few Samples for helping me out would have been nice .__. So if you wanna share suff hit me up and we have a go ;)
THX 4 the Review
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Why must yore music be so sexy.
We will talk soon, lover.
lol.
I got no school on thursday so fuck yer, hopefully I'll catch you.
In other news, I see you've finally found a style. And it works perfectly.
also, can i hear a sytrus Distant patch in there? Tell me if i'm right so i can get a cookie.
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IF YOU BROWSE MY FAVORITES ONE MORE TIME...
Love it bro.
I might just need to kill you and steal it.
Watch yo back n***a.
Also cocks.
I'm still on an epic quest to collab with you.
IT WILL HAPPEN
IT IS DESTINY
Author's Response:
IT R TREU WHAT YE SAI!
<3
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Fucken sick effects in here man! Intro is decent as well. Good stuff.
PROBLEM IS- that gated synth is waaaaay to overpowering. i can barely hear the drums bro-
AND WHERES THE BASS? its drum and BASS! gotta get some in there.
gj overall, melodies are awesome as always ceb :]
keep it up bro!
zack
Author's Response:
yeah haha the bass i picked does not really bump my subwolfer. i noticed that and i was like shit hows it going to sound all together.
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Its not that we "we thin your beats slow"
It's that it, as a fact, is under 170 bpm. it's not a matter of oppinion. your arguement had no validity.
As for the part, the intro is amazing. the bass and fx are spot on, but the main thing holding you back is your drums. Work on filling those out with a bunch of fill-ins and hats and maybe a few conga hits and youll be set.
Author's Response:
Cebsters eat can be made in 170 but he placed his Drumwork like it sound slower ;) I can make a HipHop Beat at 160 too... well, I made already xD And you're right... I am working more on the empty Spaces here. Maybe I'll leave the Concept kinda like that for the full Song but I' change the Beat a bit now. Drums earlier, more fill ins, more Souning over all, but no more electronic stuff, maybe more acoustic Sound like a special Perc or an african Instrument. I am really new to DnB at all and I don't know how to get Tons of HiHats, Rides and Crashes to work altogether. Everytime I listen to a Pro Jungle Song I go OMG it sound all the same Style in every Track but I just can't aim the Structure at all. Too many high Sounds at the same time .__. I need to find some deeper Tutorials...
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Brings me back. It's like, sonic revamped. especially sonic heroes or adventure 2 battle. This is amazing.
Great job on this. no flaws whatsoever.
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