... :3
I love you
... :3
I love you
Why...? I'm ugly.
Yo man!
Long time no talk huh?
Amazing one here.
Lots of improvement here! Great mixdown and sound choices.
I'd like the .flp file if you'd like? I won't steal it, i have no reason to. I just want to see what i can do with it.
Peace!
xDDD never thought u would find ur way to this track, especially cuz its hiphop but yeah I could send u the file if you like...
yo sexy ma n***a
MM
I love how you obscurely slipped my myspace into the end of that author comment
I LOVE YOU
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Wow!
Sick!
I like that snare! ( needs a bit more punch but 's all good :D )
Give those vocals now. I swear, i'll kill you if you don't.
It sounds like more of a buildup that an actual track, but all the same, its very rolly and the effects are spot on. I like those tiny variations in the drum patterns, gives it nice flow. Bass is sick, but needs more variation. Compliments the drums perfectly though!
I agree with Quarl that there is always room for improvement, but all in all, it's a huge improvement on the last one!
I'll deffo keep an eye on you for more stuff like this.
Peace bro
Zack
PS:
GET AIM PLESE
FOR MEEeeE
(we can collab if you'd like :D)
I didn't want to modulate the Bassline at all here... its just a short Pieve and I have no experience with Bassmodulation Xp So I just left it like this and of course its flowing without shiftng too ;) But I will work out something on the final Track. if you want to share some Stuff your are always welcome :D I asked SadSpoon for a Snare Pack and he didn't want to give me something at all, he said I should use the Snares I have to create something cool. Actually I understand him but HEY! Just a few Samples for helping me out would have been nice .__. So if you wanna share suff hit me up and we have a go ;)
THX 4 the Review
I SWEAR >:[
IF YOU BROWSE MY FAVORITES ONE MORE TIME...
Love it bro.
I might just need to kill you and steal it.
Watch yo back n***a.
Also cocks.
I'm still on an epic quest to collab with you.
IT WILL HAPPEN
IT IS DESTINY
Yooooououuuu crank that
Fucken sick effects in here man! Intro is decent as well. Good stuff.
PROBLEM IS- that gated synth is waaaaay to overpowering. i can barely hear the drums bro-
AND WHERES THE BASS? its drum and BASS! gotta get some in there.
gj overall, melodies are awesome as always ceb :]
keep it up bro!
zack
yeah haha the bass i picked does not really bump my subwolfer. i noticed that and i was like shit hows it going to sound all together.
LOL@ceb
Its not that we "we thin your beats slow"
It's that it, as a fact, is under 170 bpm. it's not a matter of oppinion. your arguement had no validity.
As for the part, the intro is amazing. the bass and fx are spot on, but the main thing holding you back is your drums. Work on filling those out with a bunch of fill-ins and hats and maybe a few conga hits and youll be set.
Cebsters eat can be made in 170 but he placed his Drumwork like it sound slower ;) I can make a HipHop Beat at 160 too... well, I made already xD And you're right... I am working more on the empty Spaces here. Maybe I'll leave the Concept kinda like that for the full Song but I' change the Beat a bit now. Drums earlier, more fill ins, more Souning over all, but no more electronic stuff, maybe more acoustic Sound like a special Perc or an african Instrument. I am really new to DnB at all and I don't know how to get Tons of HiHats, Rides and Crashes to work altogether. Everytime I listen to a Pro Jungle Song I go OMG it sound all the same Style in every Track but I just can't aim the Structure at all. Too many high Sounds at the same time .__. I need to find some deeper Tutorials...
I like it alot!
Good:
Love the funky chill chords and synths in there. Very neo-funk and organic sounding. The effects are spot-on and sound very professional. The mastering is rate as well!
Bad:
The drumming could be better. Not the sequencing, per-say, that was fairly well done. just that the sounds could be better and more prominent; especially the kick
not much bad here buddy, lucky you.
Overall:
I will deffo be sure to review other songs of yours another time. A nice little gem pile here.
Faved and fived
Zack
Yeah my drums are one of my weaker points in my music, but one day ill get it right ;D
Thanks for the feedback!
Wow!
You are the receiver of one of 3 tens I've given out in my Newgrounds career. And worthy of it, nonetheless.
Shit man, have you progressed since I heard you first. This is some of the deepest and most well produced pieces of music I have ever had the priviledge (spelling?) of listening to. That growling sub, mixed with that metallic, sharp snare gives this a great atmosphere, and I am DEFFO downloading this.
Cheers man, I'll hopefully talk to you on aim later.
Zack
PS
Could you maybe check out my latest song and drop a review? You dont have to if you dont want to. :]
Thanks for the review! I am honored! :O
Sure, I'll talk on AIM, and I'll check out your most recent song. I'll see if I feel like reviewing at the time :P
Thanks for the review! :D
Just a humble 14 y/o making House&DnB in his free time.
Age 30, Male
Student
Hamilton Academy of Music
Los Angeles, CA
Joined on 7/15/08